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Looking for someone to beta/nit pick a self insert Yuugiou fanfic I'm working on. I'm trying to do this thing realisiticly and IC and all so I'd really appreciate people spot checking me to make sure I don't start sliding down the slope towards Sue-dom. [The fic thingi I posted the first bit of a while back]
This fic is mostly Yuugi centric with Yami Bakura being a trouble maker for the pltodevice. Basic consept is that Kaiba's holding anotehr tounry and Yuugi is going to be doing it as himself with his other self as a chearleader rather then the one dueling. Yami Bakura, being bored, decides to have some fun with the tounry and probally will be doing a 'Beat me if you can and PROVE you can do it' thing. No real high stakes on the tounry [which is why Yuugi's doing it as himself] It's mostly a friendship fic. Kinda a flimsy plot but it's a challange to m'self to see if I can do a realisitc SI that isn't a Sue. ^^
This fic is mostly Yuugi centric with Yami Bakura being a trouble maker for the pltodevice. Basic consept is that Kaiba's holding anotehr tounry and Yuugi is going to be doing it as himself with his other self as a chearleader rather then the one dueling. Yami Bakura, being bored, decides to have some fun with the tounry and probally will be doing a 'Beat me if you can and PROVE you can do it' thing. No real high stakes on the tounry [which is why Yuugi's doing it as himself] It's mostly a friendship fic. Kinda a flimsy plot but it's a challange to m'self to see if I can do a realisitc SI that isn't a Sue. ^^