story moves at a much faster pace now, I've noticed. Quite a few scenes were taken out, but I guess it was for the good of it. (Even though I kinda liked the shopping scene. And didn't Shin get a stuffed wolf out of that?) Helena and Shin have changed, and I like Shin's portrayal much better now. Helena seems a bit more self-centered than before. I also like the cooking scene with Ariel actually eating. There were a couple words which were either misspelled or not real words, I couldn't find anything to tell me what they were supposed to be. At the moment I can't find them though.
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No clue if that'll come in later.
If you find the errors, lemme know.
And if the non existant words were from Kajiro [or Shin rambling in Japanese], don't worry about ;em. :)