Gimme feedback! <3

[frannyan]

For all who don't remember/know, Sword of Damocles is an orginal fiction written by Judy and m'self that started orginaly as an RPG and has been gutted and redone many times. This is the first draft of the 4th rewrite of this story. Concrit is very welcome, as is spotting typos and spelling errors, reactions to characters, situations, gut reactions, ect. Trying to get feed back to help shapethe editing process.

First chapter: http://damocles.fran-web.net/Chapt1.html